Eric Jerome Dickey has written a few of my favorite books. I
really dig the
Brotha; First thing I dig is how all of his books use characters from
all his other books. Dickey is one the best at
interconnecting the characters and stories. Second thing, the
Brotha does is create an interesting premises.
Snazzy Title, Great visual photo, great idea. But
sometimes Dickey leaves me flat. To be fair, I will give you an example. In
Milk in my Coffee, that book led you too believe that it was a tale of interracial romance but it kept giving you real,
not so subtle, hints that our Female lead was not
European American but an
Afrikan American. How? By continually mentioning the
Woman's Booty three or four
gajillion times! Early on in the book I figured that out but it went all the way til the end of the book before it finally confirmed what I figured in the second act.
So over the years I kinda hesitate when grabbing an Eric Jerome Dickey book. But I do like the
Brothas books so I grabbed
Chasing Destiny!Quick Peep! Spoiler Alert! Spoiler Alert! If you have not read the book and want to then go read Mista Jaycee's Sex Tape Posts and come back after you read the book! The book focuses on the love affair between soon to be divorcee
Keith and his Girlfriend
"Billie/Ducati. Keith is in a very messy divorce with
Carmen, a high powered Lawyer who like the
Wicked Witch of the East uses all of her powers to make Keith's life miserable. Keith's crime, he
wants a
divorce! Carmen is determined that she and her hubby will continue to be a family, married til death do them part. And she means til Death do them Part! Caught up in the middle of all this is Keith's 15 year old daughter
Destiny. Destiny is book smart and understands that her Parents marriage is dead and done. She understands this even if her Mother and her
Grandparents don't!
The book does a great job of
illustrating Destiny's confusion and fear. Her Mother is
manipulative and mean! Destiny sneaks out and meets up with a few fellas she met in at the Beverly Center. She ends up in a fight, ends up drugged and gang raped. Worse! They filmed it and now they are selling it as part of
Hoodrats Part Five all up and down
Crenshaw!
Parents Moment to Pause....Shudder and Throw Up!
OK! Pause over! Now back to why I didn't like the book! Billie rides a
Ducati and is supposedly a part of the Black Biker scene but Dickey got lazy cause he didn't really flesh out the Black Biker scene. Instead he gave us some eye candy, some
Lipstick Lesbian Biker Chicks poppin wheelies at the Starbucks on
Crenshaw. That is not the Black Biker scene. Billie instead is just a good looking Woman on a Motorcycle not part of a culture. Dig?
EJD said that Billie was part of the scene not just a weekend Biker dig? It's glossed over! Hey Eric! Los Angeles has a long history of Black Motorcycle Clubs that are still active! The
Chosen Few, Brothers of the Sun, Royal Aces! You could have talked with them and used them. There are also tons of Female Motor Clubs too. You should have
definitely used them!
Billie tells Keith she's pregnant just as he's about to break it off. Why? Cause
Wicked Witch Carmen got him
by the short and curlies and he don't know what to do. That's why!
EJD diverts us with
Raheem, a very rich Afro/Latino dude that wants Billie! He buys a
Ducati that he can't ride just to get next to her.
Now....I know it's getting crazy but you remember how I mentioned
EJD's gift for
interconnecting his characters right? Billie's roommate, an over sexed Korean raised by a Black Man, has a
lil Bi-racial
Sista that's running round with the Producers of
Hoodrats Five. Raheem's proud of his niece who attends
USC Film school but is completely unaware that she is the real producer of
Girl Fights and Hoodrats Five.
Raheem's niece, Lupe, rides up
Crenshaw Blvd. scoping and stalking young talent for her to films. She lures the
unsuspecting teenagers into sex parties or coaxes one of the girls to beat up a girl she may randomly choose on the street. Lupe, got the whole game on lock. She has the equipment, she employs the goon
squad to hawk her tapes and scout for talent.
Raheem's niece, Lupe, is a piece of work! She's
pimpin everybody! She pimps
Destiny! First, she coaxes
Q,
Vivian's(Billie's roommate)
lil Sis (Billie, Vivian and Destiny have no idea they are
interconnected) to fight Destiny. Destiny hits her with her purse and ruins her model worthy face. Then Destiny goes to a party where she is drugged and well I told you the rest. (Barf!)
The book dedicates
alot of ink to Carmen is stalking Billie, berating her and finally bribing her to take her Baby and leave Keith alone. The book gets lost from Destiny and Billie and
Keith's relationship and gets lost in Carmen and Keith drama. In between this we have scenes of Destiny is on a revenge quest for all those involved in drugging and gang raping her. Billie is looking to kill Carmen who she believes tried to run her down and what about Grandpa?
All and all there was no real resolution. All of the characters had this six degrees of separation thing going on but none were connected at the end. The connections were not realized!
That's what I call Lazy writing. You wanted to write a story using the Black Biker culture but you did none of the homework. You wanted to tell a multilayer story, cool! But you didn't tie up the loose ends.
The Mo character gets his whole Southern region
blown off! But Destiny is never shown to be implicated. Destiny is shown plotting to eliminate Billie, the problem, but never shown to stand up to her
manipulative Mother. Destiny is shown disfiguring
Goldie but leaving
Lupe, hurt but alive even after she realizes that it is
Lupe who is the puppet master. Worse of all I can't feel sorry for Destiny cause she managed to destroy
alot of the DVDS.
Ultimately you didn't live up to the title. You didn't really make the focus on Destiny! Sure she was
confused, angry, raped and exploited but Keith never really let his daughter know you are the most important person in my life.
You are my Child! He never really allowed Billie and Destiny to build any kind of
relationship. Destiny's life is wrecked but where is the Justice for her? All the characters ended up hurt in some kinda way but not punished and held accountable for their misdeeds!
Well luckily
EJD will write a few hundred more for me to enjoy. Tell me what you think.
BE Prayerful!BE Mindful! BE Careful!
Jaycee